Wow, so powerful and you wrote it amazingly. So little words but so strong atmosphere. Simply brilliant! Well done, your word choice is excellent and I must congrats you on this masterpiece. It has some special tone that adds so much effect to the rhythm. I am impressed again with your writing.

Wow... powerful... You are able to amaze me with such short yet effective pieces every time. I just love it!

This is definitly a favorite from you. short yet held such an impact on me whilst reading it. Effective as are all your poetry and they also hold so much power and depth.The flow amazingly smoothe which took me away. Great piece. ~Mel