Comments : Hero? No, Villain

  • 10 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    Hey
    i like this poem very much. great choice of words. the lenght of the poem eas perfect. i rated this a 5

  • 10 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    Really good poem! The words u used were perfect and it flowed very well!! Keep up the good work!

  • 10 years ago

    by Jenna

    I really like this very much! the word choice was terriffic! i must say this deserves a 5/5...the flow and everything was terriffice! keep it up hun!

  • 10 years ago

    by Kalee

    This is another amazingly written poem. I couldnt find anything wrong with it. 5/5

    Kalee

  • 10 years ago

    by Cory Mastrandrea

    In all honesty, this poem isn't anything special. you took a topic that has been around for as long as man, and didn't develop it at all inside of your poem: no psychoanalysis, no twists or turns of emotion, no plots, nothing. It is shallow, not entertaining, and it neither instructs nor delights. If you wish to write about the hero esque thing, you should read some comics about teh types of people who batle back and forth about this subject like batman. Some batman writersare amazing and I think you could learn from them. also, your rhymy scheme sort of takes out any serious aspect you could have added because it is forced like a younger writer and often gets in teh way of the development of ideas.

  • 10 years ago

    by Lets Keep it A Surprise

    Oo an eerie vibe chilled my spine while I was reading this. Because reading this poem, I actually got second thoughts about being nice.

    Haha wow powerful words with a powerful meaning :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Miu

    Uhh I loved this additude you put in this poem! For me it was special I haven't read that sort of poems, ever, so I won't agree reader above(Cory). And also It felt for me like you were laughing at the ones who were waiting for you to be a hero, really liked that!
    5/5 Keep it up!

  • 10 years ago

    by nikki

    I liked this poem, but the topic was a bit cliche, i have read so many of these type of poems and this is not the best but it was ok. the wording was great and the structure was very readable. it's still a 5/5 from me.

    nikki

  • 10 years ago

    by Hannah Emellia

    Hah, a truly loely poem. I like it. It's got an awkward rhyme to it. <3
    the only issue I have is... NO CAPITOLIZATION. =[
    It was good, but the lack of capitolization... sort of irked my nerves. Nicely written...

  • 10 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I love this poem... You have great attitude lol...
    Seriously, this is very original and creative, I like it form the beginning to the end. Whole poem has good flow and the topic is truly interesting. You held my full attention through the whole piece, mostly with effective atmosphere and imagery that you created. Truly great idea for the poem.
    Keep up!
    5/5 from me

  • 10 years ago

    by Gizmo

    Love it 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by XxAlysxX

    I enjoyed reading this poem and though the topic has been used many times, i like the fact that you put the efforts in making it your own and i think you accomplished it. ;)

  • 9 years ago

    by monica

    Wow this poem is so awesome very powerful