I don't need you any more!

by When will i ever be happy   Oct 16, 2007


Thinking about you and the days we used to share.
You told me you love me and that you'ld allways care.
What a fool i was for beliveing you.
I belived that you loved me and that i was you're boo.
But things have changed and so have i.
I no longer belive you its lie after lie.
I can't belive i let you treat me the way you did
Telling me you're with you're mates when there givein me names of girls you've been with.
But oh well sh*t happens in life
Go find a next gurl to call you're wife
Beacause you no what i realy dont care no more
I hope you happy with that little hoor.

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  • 14 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    You showed strength and courage in your poem ,a little sadness and regret. Good job with just a little editing it would be a fantastic poem Good job anyway
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Becca

    That was great. Powerful emotion and strength.

  • 16 years ago

    by browneyezz

    Excellent poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Sapphire

    Actually make it 5/5. I just saw that it was under internet slang ,my bad. Love it!

  • 16 years ago

    by Sapphire

    Wow excellent flowing. Please keep writing. Hmmmm...... 4/5?
    I love this part
    "But things have changed and so have I
    I no longer believe you ,its lie after lie"
    P.S
    If you want actually spell out the word.
    But in some cases it just makes it flow better if you don't. This is one of those cases.

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