Wow man that was wicked, the thought that went in to this piece is unreal, the structure and rhyme never miss a beat its a really good read that brought a smile to my face at the same time which can be quite hard to find.
Beautiful ! It was just perfect for this time of year and it was different from what I am used to reading on this site. The descriptions you gave were so vivid, I could see the items clearly. Well done, I truly enjoyed it. *5/5*
This was truely an amazing piece. For some reason parts reminded me of Harry Potter which was interesting. I enjoy reading poems about holloween as they are always filled with so many mysterious things. Word choice great really powerful. Well done. Excellent poem. ~Mel