Impressive.

It flowed flawlessly, your rymthes worked and it didn't seem like you were forcing them.
You hit the nail with the hammer, for the questions. I think there definitly ones guys ask.
I think this poem would be great as a two part. Get the womens point of veiw;)

Nonetheless an excellent peice.

---Elly.

So true, so true!
Nice topic m8, i thinks its a brilliant idea.

In my opinion, I would make your stanza's 4 lines (which would shorten the poem). I would then ask a female author on here to collab with you. Call the poem "Questions" and finish the poem from a womans perspective.

That would make this poem freakin awesome!

Its a good read as stand alone though.

[5/5]
~Pete.

"Its" should be it's
"i" should be I

spelling mistakes can make a poem look like crap , even if it's not so bad

I agree with some other commenter's.It would be better if you got a womans point of veiw in there too.But overall I would give it a 4/5.I didn't really like how simple it was but it was still an amusing piece and interesting to see how a guy thinks.
Good job,
Keep writing,
Miranda

The rhetorical questions have a great implicationa and effect on this piece. It is really imaginative and well written plus the rhymes are great. 5/5

tc
Fsams

Hey i really like this one. good job 5/5
the rhyming is great.

btw thanks for the comment i'm in hurry now so i can't leave longer comments I'll check out more of yours later

Take care

OOOHHH Quack!!! Its an incredible piece!!
I absolutely liked this poem!! HONESTLY!!
5/5 or more....

Sorry I've mis spelled your name!!! Its not quack its Gack(Gary). Is n't it??
Sorry about that!!!!

Hahahaha, both poems are excellent and so true, you've summed it up to a tee

This is really good. Yet, it doesn't really seem like a poem. It's good though, I liked it. 4/5

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