Comments : They Say As We Breathe Deeply, How Easier It Will Get

  • 16 years ago

    by FountainsOfBlood

    Totally agree with Britt, you don't even think it's about cutting till the end.

    This poem is amazing! Your poems always blow me away and you just get better with time. I dunno what else to say, without sounding so cliche... :S 100/100! So talented!
    Keep it up xx XD

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    I disagree with both of the comments above me, actually. I really was thinking about cutting during the whole thing. I'm an ex-cutter myself, and it pretty much reminded me of cutting. I do, however, think this is the best cutting poem I have ever read. It's just beautiful, and to make a poem about cutting beautiful is a really hard thing to do. Your warning was making me a little worried at firt, but I liked it. Haha. It prepares the reader and makes them really curious as to what they're about to read. You had me completely sucked in from the very first line. Your word choice was fantastic. It was interesting, but it wasn't so difficult that you had to go look up a word in the dictionary every 5 seconds.

    You have definitely become a favorite writer of mine. I'm so glad you entered my contest. Your style of writing just amazes me, and I strive to write more like this. Thank you for being such and inspiration!

    Keep writing!
    Cayce