Comments : Color Of Life

  • 9 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    A wonderful poem dealing with abstract thoughts combined into a relationship with the abstraction of life itself. One can really feel the brushstrokes.

  • 9 years ago

    by Nula

    Great poem

  • 9 years ago

    by Isabella

    It was well written and funny.

  • 9 years ago

    by Jessica Evelyn Maxwell

    This poem is pretty awesome,
    well done with this write,
    amazing work =)

  • 9 years ago

    by The Herald

    This should be in poems about life.... u just didnt want it to git swamped by the endless flood of poems though eh?

  • 9 years ago

    by Ashley Ann

    Cool poem! Nicely penned! I love the visual image sent to me. I loved it loved it loved it! :D One thing though, go through it and read it out loud to yourself to check the grammar. Otherwise GREAT! 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Jenna Rose Kat

    Aww this ones really cute. I love it! Its added to my favorites.

  • 9 years ago

    by Nigel Oliver

    Amazing.

    I loved your imagery, how descriptive you where.
    The way you expressed such vividness is amazing.

    This was a truely fun read, i love it.

    5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Blissful

    I just loved this! It was fresh and something I had never seen before. I loved the images you described with your words...they were refreshing. The last stanza was perfect and a wonderful way to end your poem. Well done *5/5*

  • Now this was a powerful poem. I loved the feeling I got when I read it. The flow was just perfect and the expression was just amazing. Great job. 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 9 years ago

    by Allison

    I loved it! It flowed so nicely that I had to read it out loud a couple times. Vrai amusant! Keep up the good work. *5/5*

  • 9 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I really enjoyed this poem, I'm a big fan of art, in many ways. I'm actually studying art at the moment. This was truely a great read. I loved the abstract feeling you portrayed into this. The imagery was fantastic and I can relate to this deeply. An excellent read. Well done. ~Mel

  • 9 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    Aww, this was really cute. I like how you mentioned a number of colours. It made the poem appear colourful itself.

    Well done.

  • 9 years ago

    by RobinAnn13

    Very good and very creative. Awesomeness! <3

  • 9 years ago

    by judith redmount

    Strange, but nice poem. So many options in life and all the options with all the consequences need to be considered before taking a decision. That's what I got from this. nice.

  • 9 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Perfectly done! i love the last stanza it made me smile actually so i was enjoyed reading it keep it up!5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    I thought this was a very good poem. It showed how people have choices to make and how they should make them fast or else lose the previelage(sp) of choosing for themseles, the rhyming was a little forced at parts, and the flow was a littlte shoppy, but still a good, 5/5