How much love is there in a punch?

by Fran   Oct 28, 2007


I remember our wonderful first kiss,
The special first kiss that can never be repeated.

I recall that beautiful first afternoon in bed,
Such delights that can never be recaptured.

Last night you hit me for the first time.
You will never get another chance.

How much love is there in a punch?

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  • 14 years ago

    by Stephanie Michelle

    Very powerful piece in little words.. And an all too true reality as well. Well written

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    I really liked this one as I can relate to it because I've had to pick up the pieces when my sister was hit by her ex partner. I hate the topic but love the poem. Well written and very true. No love is in a punch, 5/5. Em

  • 15 years ago

    by Wereallbladesarntwe

    Made me wince and shiver and feel all too sad, but how true, no winners on either side, see it all too much in my job role, i wrote a poem called My Man, about DV too, weel put, xp

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemon Square Bear23

    Well to anwser ur question i personally think there is NO love in a punch! lol well i just came to say nice write! 5/5 always
    Kate~

  • 16 years ago

    by Corinne

    I know I commented on this one before. Still stands out

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