-please...don`t tell me you love me- repetition of this line is very effective and it leaves great impression.
Whole poem is greatly6 written, filled with touching and greatly expressed emotions. Flow of the whole piece is perfect, and every stanza contains beauty and sadness in the same time.
I can't pick my favorite part, I equally like each stanza.
I know I've said this to you before, but how do you reach into my soul and put my feelings into your poems? I know this is not about my life, but it very well could be.. and I'm sure very many people can relate to it in one way or another.
You have such an unbelievable way of piecing together sentences that slice through flesh and blood and go straight to the heart.
I don't think I could pick a favorite line or stanza, but I guess the second one is the one that hits closest to home.
The repetition of that certain like really created something beautiful within my heart. This poem held alot of emotions which tempered with my feelings while reading it. The title was great I loved it because even from that I could feel the sadness. A gorgeous poem. ~Mel