Comments : Don`t Tell Me You Love Me

  • 9 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    Here's your comment. :)

  • 9 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    -please...don`t tell me you love me- repetition of this line is very effective and it leaves great impression.
    Whole poem is greatly6 written, filled with touching and greatly expressed emotions. Flow of the whole piece is perfect, and every stanza contains beauty and sadness in the same time.
    I can't pick my favorite part, I equally like each stanza.
    Keep writing!

  • 9 years ago

    by Tracey777taintedslitta

    Wow, this is an awesome peom... really touching... i love how u can put how it just feels in words... beautifully written... well done...

  • 9 years ago

    by Boy

    Pain has enveloped my soul`s desire

    my favourite lince. excellent.

  • 9 years ago

    by get offa my back

    Wowwie....

  • 9 years ago

    by Coco

    This brought tears to me eyes as i read it....so very powerfull....so emotional....from the heart....simply amazing..i can relate to this poem so much...5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Tiffany

    "promises made but now ignored"

    Wow. that is written with so much emotion, i loved it.

  • 9 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    I know I've said this to you before, but how do you reach into my soul and put my feelings into your poems? I know this is not about my life, but it very well could be.. and I'm sure very many people can relate to it in one way or another.

    You have such an unbelievable way of piecing together sentences that slice through flesh and blood and go straight to the heart.

    I don't think I could pick a favorite line or stanza, but I guess the second one is the one that hits closest to home.

    Great write indeed.

  • 9 years ago

    by Melpomene

    The repetition of that certain like really created something beautiful within my heart. This poem held alot of emotions which tempered with my feelings while reading it. The title was great I loved it because even from that I could feel the sadness. A gorgeous poem. ~Mel

  • 9 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    I was going to be like Ann Marie and simply say "Here is your comment" but upon reading this I felt as though I was about to choke up in tears myself.

    It is painful to hear the words goodbye, but when followed with I love you it tends to rip a soul into a million pieces.

    My heart at this moment feels as though it may never be put back together again and somehow this poem reflects just that.

    I love the emotions that you have keyed in to this piece. There is no escaping the heartache that you have described so vividly while leaving the feeling of doom upon the reader.

    As I have always said, you are a talented writer and this poem proves it even more.

    This is raw and thought provoking. And repeating the line "Please, do not say that you love me" continues to drive it home even more fierce.

    Well done my dear... well done

    ~~Sher

  • 9 years ago

    by Melody

    Nicely written poem , interesting flow, good rhyme !
    5/5

    *~Melody~*

  • 9 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    I'm sure it's already been said, but here it is anyway.

    I like the repetitive line "please...don't tell me you love me", it gives that line such power.

    The emotion crafted in the magnificent lines of this poem are astounding.
    You have such a wonderful way with words and I would love to see a new poem posted.
    Love ya, Holly

  • 8 years ago

    by ForeverASickKid

    Im speechless this poem was amazing

  • 8 years ago

    by katie

    I loke your poem its very good

  • 7 years ago

    by Natalie84

    This is my favorite ever from you. It flowed so easily and truly made me feel the power of what you were saying! This is an awesome write my friend!!! So nicely done!