Comments : Small Town

  • 9 years ago

    by Iola

    Hi - very passionate write. It's clear where your hearts' at... :-)

    Iola

  • 9 years ago

    by Lenny

    That was awesome! I loved the flow of it, the rhyme actually worked(for others it barely does). I appreciate your message. Ummm few spelling errors, forgot an s somewhere. The message was great, I felt the story unfold like a blanket. Very well done.

  • 9 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    Hey, thanks for asking me to read some of your poems. This one is really beautiful. I live in a small town and it makes me want to see more of my small town. I have lived in a lot of small towns but from reading your poems I would love to visit yours.

  • 9 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Life seems different when living in a small town. Many years ago me and my family moved to the big city, one of the largest in Holland. I regretted it ever since. We should all live in small comunities because the anonimity of big cities dosn't make our lives any richer.
    Beautiful poem, by the way!
    I am giving you 5/5.

    Take care,

    Ingrid

  • 9 years ago

    by Roxiee An

    Adding you to my fav poets
    Loved this poem
    10/5
    gr8
    its just great
    well done Brother
    take care,
    Rohan

  • 9 years ago

    by Joshua Grider

    By the way I loved ur poem.
    and your super long name. lol
    I voted and gave it a 5/5
    please return the favor.

  • 9 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Very beautiful write!!!
    Enjoyed reading it.Keep up the good work.
    5/5

    God bless u

  • 9 years ago

    by Katie Lady

    This is so beautiful! Wish I could write like this. Keep writing! 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    Hey,
    It is a very beautiful poem, when I started reading it, I couldn't stop. the flow is good as well as the rhyming. they say 'home is were the heart is' well I think its clear were your heart is.
    nice work 5/5
    kisses stephanie

  • 9 years ago

    by Isabella

    To me it was really touching and heartfelt.

  • 9 years ago

    by Jessica Evelyn Maxwell

    This is an excellent poem,
    great job,
    the flow, rhymes and the write itself is excellent.
    you are very talented.
    i love all of your poems.
    =)

  • 9 years ago

    by danielle

    This poem is excellent good job i liked and and thought it was good keep up the good work your really good at this

  • 9 years ago

    by Brittany

    This is SO cute, and I know it's definitely the way I'd feel if I ever left my hometown. Sure it's small, but you grow to love it and become attached. I think it's brilliant you captured all that.
    5/5.

  • 9 years ago

    by the simple girl

    Aww this is a really sweet poem, I like it. I live in a small town... or what used to be a small town and I really like living here. I like your work, and it flows nicely.

    ~Ashley

  • Very well written and the flow was good. 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 9 years ago

    by Pete

    Really good flow keeps the reader attentive right the way through the poem. Nice use of vocabulary.
    Solid and bold rhyme scheme increases the intensity of this piece in my eyes.

    Very nice work on this one.

    ~Pete.

  • 9 years ago

    by Natasha

    You did a brilliant job of putting passion on paper.
    If or that is to say when you read this you can not help but to think of that small town yourself, and it doesn't have to be the same, but think about where your heart lies.
    I think you did an excellent job on this and the rate from me will be 5/5!
    thanks for the read,
    ~* Natasha *~

  • 9 years ago

    by Blissful

    I loved the repitition you used here. It was very effective. The imagery was flawless and the flow was not forced. Overall a wonderful write. Well done *5/5*

  • 9 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    Just to let you know.. you left me small comments:

    "Very cute poem. I really enjoy this one. 5/5 from me!!

    This is really great one. The emotion flowed very well. I can feel it."

    so i'm returning the favor:

    This poems is really good. Your rhyming was great :)

    5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Nigel Oliver

    I loved this, it was really well written, and you described your emotions flawlessly

    5/5