That was awesome! I loved the flow of it, the rhyme actually worked(for others it barely does). I appreciate your message. Ummm few spelling errors, forgot an s somewhere. The message was great, I felt the story unfold like a blanket. Very well done.
Hey, thanks for asking me to read some of your poems. This one is really beautiful. I live in a small town and it makes me want to see more of my small town. I have lived in a lot of small towns but from reading your poems I would love to visit yours.
Life seems different when living in a small town. Many years ago me and my family moved to the big city, one of the largest in Holland. I regretted it ever since. We should all live in small comunities because the anonimity of big cities dosn't make our lives any richer.
Beautiful poem, by the way!
I am giving you 5/5.
It is a very beautiful poem, when I started reading it, I couldn't stop. the flow is good as well as the rhyming. they say 'home is were the heart is' well I think its clear were your heart is.
nice work 5/5
This is SO cute, and I know it's definitely the way I'd feel if I ever left my hometown. Sure it's small, but you grow to love it and become attached. I think it's brilliant you captured all that.
You did a brilliant job of putting passion on paper.
If or that is to say when you read this you can not help but to think of that small town yourself, and it doesn't have to be the same, but think about where your heart lies.
I think you did an excellent job on this and the rate from me will be 5/5!
thanks for the read,
~* Natasha *~