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  • 16 years ago

    by Fading Memories

    Wow.... a very heartfelt and moving poem....
    Those kind of poems are hard to get these days...
    Amazing!

    Nadia

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Four Letter Lie

    Hey, i luv that poem. it reminds me of my life... great work 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    It was a good poem but I would suggest to try to put in into stanzas.. it will really enhance this piece.

    Anyway

    using the title as the final line/word is really good, keep up the good work