This poem had so much emotion to it. I could feel it coursing through the words like the blood through my veins. The repetition of "Devoured by his fears" really brought everything into perspective, it made you think. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

Wow this was really great, keep it up,
i've read a couple of your poems now, and they are fantastical, so i was wondering if you could comment and vote on sum of my poems, it would be greatly appreciated.
I'm new to writing poetry so i need some feedback, thanks,
Polaroid
p.s GREAT JOB

Very great poem. Simply breath taking. 5/5

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This is really a cute and creative poem. I loved the wordings and the way it flows makes it a superb poem and easy for the tongue. Loved it 5/5

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Fsams

This poem has so much feelling I loved reading it 5/5

I could truly relate with the emotion you are describing here. The emotions were real and the imagery flawless.

"Lost now in a deeper recess of his thought,
He finds a puzzle."
^beautiful.

Well done *5/5*

I like it. the ending wasn't sad, it was intense.
throughout this whole poem, i could feel the emotion. i know sometimes girls don't realize it, but you guys do have feelings and are sad and down at times and it takes areal man to put his feelings down on paper. i think its amazing.

i will comment more poems when i get on tomorrow cuz i gotta go, but thanks for the comment and keep up the good work!!!

I love the way you put an emotion to this one. You're a pure talent. I love your poems.
Another 5 rated poem from me!!!

This gives a great desciption of feeling trapped and is very well written. this is very intense. very sad as well.

keep up the good work :)

This is a nice poem =) dark, yet I like it =)
~ Keep it real ~
Nicole xx

This poem was so fabulous. Each stanza had an amazing flow and was mystifying. One of the best I've ever read. 5/5