Mannn, i dunno why, but this made me extremely sad! I love it, it's so...perfect? Lol. I'm speechless. I hate when I can't comment poems properly! haha. 5/5!! This is definately going in my faves!

` Liz =]

A very creative write, it flowed well, and created hard to explain feelings within me.

Excellent job,
--Elaine:D

Abstract, but intruiging. i like it, it's very original. definately can identify with losing all the magic of childhood and this poem describes that well. especially when talking about mermaids and peter pan. i rank this 5/5

I love this. It was so creative & original. I can truly say I've never read anything quite like it. The emotions were amazing, this one definately intrigued me. :) The flow was flawless, and overall, you did an amazing job. :) Overall: 5.5

-- Steph <3

This is a cool poem, i like how you brought in our childhood fantacies... i do miss those days!

Such amazing poem written with such poignant emotions and well expressed with very descriptive choice of words. way you express yourself in such a way that is so enchanting..

5/5!