Wow.
The flow was a bit off here and there. . . I think because the long lines. But, overall it was great.

You had a wonderful start and ending. (:
Great word choice.
Great everything.

I loved the poem. I can kinda relate to it, I think is why.
I love those poems, that people can relate to.
They're wonderful.

5.5

It was a great poem :) I believe the flow was smooth, good job. I like the language use in this poem. You really did a good job on this one ^_^ Keep writing my friend.

You have one minor error though.
Put your perfect hand against my chest and tell the world what you felt..
=ellipses have three (...)

Well it's not wrong, sometimes I use two periods too.

Thanks for the comment.

This was cute to say the least 5/5 all the way! and u dont even know how great you r!

It's definately hard to lose love and it stays with you forever, and you'll always have a space for that person in your heart. I think we often times want to fix a once broken love, but I believe we should just move on, there's a reason it didn't work out. Great job as always 5/5 GG23

Ahh that was amazing! You know how to make long sentenced poetry flow flawlessly. I could relate with the emotions you decribed here.

"Take a took in my eyes; Besides your reflection I know you can see my love for you"
"[A heart that has your name carved into it and beats for that very reason]"

^These two lines were unique and just blew me away...totally relatable.

Well done *5/5*

Wow another great powerful poem!!! altho u had a typo

Take a took in my eyes;

i think you meant to say take a LOOK in my eyes!!! but other than that great work and keep it up!!!

<3 i love you silly

Once again.. an enjoyable poem with wonderful emotion... i found it a bit harder to find the flow in this poem but still a good job

I loved this poem. great emotion put into it. i enjoyed it from start to finish. good job!

~love~