Comments : Innocent love; our first

  • 9 years ago

    by KJ

    I really like this poem. Excellente! 5/5

    PaSsIoNaTe kIsSeS

  • 9 years ago

    by xBehindTheseHazelEyesx

    Thanks so much!

  • 9 years ago

    by Tiffany

    This is really good! its really passionate, and i liked it. 5/5!

  • 9 years ago

    by kylexthexmagnificent

    Awwww...this poem is sooo cute and beautiful. has so much emotin and passion. i love it. great job. =)

  • 9 years ago

    by babblingxbrooke

    Awww! You drew me in right from the first stanza...I loved the flow & the word choice was great...you have a great talent, so make sure to keep writing more!

    Brooke<3

  • 9 years ago

    by xXdaddys lil princessXx

    Hey thats a pretty good first poem. i like it, i dont really have much experience at this but keep writing we love it. megz

  • 9 years ago

    by Cale

    This is a really good poem. and it also shows alot of emotion! You are really good at writing!! im new at this too and i only have 2 poems and i think that yours are way better than mine!!! great job!

  • 9 years ago

    by KATIE

    I CAN RELATE TO THIS...I ENJOYED IT..=]
    NICE JOB!

  • 9 years ago

    by L3AH

    Well it being ur first its really good

  • 9 years ago

    by Lisa

    Very good...keep up the good work

  • 9 years ago

    by LoreNz0

    Well this was a hell of a good start, im looking forward to ur future work coz this was excellent!
    u capture feelings and describe them soo well =D