Comments : Through your eyes

  • 10 years ago

    by kate

    I really liked this one.
    its really short but it explains though.
    you cant live without this person.
    they keep you save.
    but if they went away you wouldnt know what to do

    it sounds like that.
    or some what. :]
    very well done.

    keep it up.
    keep on writing.
    love always and forever.

  • 10 years ago

    by Thermos

    Don't be addicted to love.

    you gotta love yourself.

    good poem.

  • 10 years ago

    by punnkrockr

    Wow this poem is really well written
    o and thanks for the comment


  • 10 years ago

    by sexyCheckers

    I cn totaly relate ~

  • 10 years ago

    by Daisy Wells

    Well done hun even though the poems short it's really powerful! the last stanza is my favourite. keep up the good work xx

  • 10 years ago

    by mikaella

    I love it ~~ like alot !!! you should comment my poems

  • 10 years ago

    by TyrantxTia

    This poem is realy good 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by jeligirl

    Short but sweet. i like this poem alot! great job. :D

  • 10 years ago

    by Fanny

    Nice poem .i .llove the poems that i read from you your a good poet

  • 10 years ago

    by Krystal

    This is really good. Gave me goosebumps.
    Good job, amazing job, keep it up, whoot

  • 10 years ago

    by Jodie Phillips

    I loved this 2....your 2 hard on yaself mate...truly.....

  • 10 years ago

    by Alexa Eudis

    I like it, short and sweet works

  • 10 years ago

    by Marwa

    Aw....i love dis poem so much it ade me realisie sumthin..
    keep it up!!!
    hope u read mines!

  • 10 years ago

    by Kayla

    Wow, this poem was created in such a unique way. I really liked it! I had to reread it a few times though to get the meaning.. but nontheless, it was great. Keep writing, thank you. 5/5 <3 <3 <3


  • 10 years ago

    by CWG

    Another great job! I know it is hard but try to learn to live and be happy for you and the hell with everyone else! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Lyndz

    I really like this one. :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Kristen

    That is wonderful...Was that a tribute to your wife?? It sounded sweet like you envied her life because she lives it so well.....*I'm not sure if that makes much sense....but anyway it was a great poem!!>>>