Comments : Don't Waste My Time

  • 9 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Since I have already stated I like your style.I will try to list the reasons why your themes continue to make a solid connection to my emotions If I ever attempt to communicate my feeligs to my soon to be exwife I will need your permission to use many of these poems

  • 9 years ago

    by kelly tavern

    Great piece of written work, i liked the verse

    Remember that saying, hell hath no fury like a woman scorned
    Well now you're about to find out just how true that proverb is
    After all those tender kisses we shared, whispered I love you's
    You're about to pay the price for all your counterfeit words.

    Its great how you have brought the emotions of what you are feeling to the readers eyes, also in alot of your poems you use the words darling,sweetheart ect which is good as I think it adds a personal touch to the piece and also gives the reader more of an insight.

    All in all a great poem 5/5
    keep up the good work hun

  • 9 years ago

    by Roses and lilys

    Another great poem. I really dont see why more people haven't rated it. The word choice was strong and in enabled the readers to feel the emotions that are in the poem. another 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Vanessa

    A tale of sweet revenge Again flawless, perfect, deep, and heartfelt. I can realte. i love your style of wit and scarsim mixed it really get the point across to the reader. Again as with all the poems of yours that I have read there is no room for improvement You deserve nothing less than 5/5 and although I believe you might actually deserve something better it is the highest I can give.

  • 9 years ago

    by The Sky is Falling

    Very good

    Remember that saying, hell hath no fury like a woman scorned

    That line made me laugh because it's so true.
    But this poem is so sad. Great job
    5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow, excellent write like always. I loved the flow of this poem it was flawless. It was very deep and had a lot of meaning that was vivdly displayed by your expertise in using words in a creative way. Great Job!!!

    Peace, Joe

  • 9 years ago

    by Robert

    I see you have alot of ageressive work here and you can sometimes relate to alot of what you say but there does come a time that there is more to life then proving paople wrong or getting back at them I wonder if you can relate that in your work more Plot121.