This was the most priceless poem ever! I couldn't stop laughing, because its sad its so true! You did a really good job at portraying your message, it was clear and to the point, with so much humor. I loved every aspect about it. The style was perfect I think if it rhymed then it would have ruined the humor. You did such an amazing job on this poem and I really enjoyed this piece! Keep it up!
I reallyy loved that poem! Its AMAZING! Your right.. all people ever care about is the outer beauty.. no one really cares to look a little harder and try to find the real beauty in people..
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HAHahaha! Awesome! The last line is great... Sadly I don't have much critisism for this one. It's great! She sounds like a very nice person! lol...
"Hands on hips darling, and show your sexy pout" I love that! I can really picture it! A beautiful girl on the outside but ugly on the inside! I know the type. Great job. 5/5