Comments : Flash That Smile, Break That Camera

  • 9 years ago

    by Alexandra Jade Brewer

    This was the most priceless poem ever! I couldn't stop laughing, because its sad its so true! You did a really good job at portraying your message, it was clear and to the point, with so much humor. I loved every aspect about it. The style was perfect I think if it rhymed then it would have ruined the humor. You did such an amazing job on this poem and I really enjoyed this piece! Keep it up!

  • 9 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow that was a great poem i loved how you used click, click it was unique and this poem reminds me of how the world just cares about looks now 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Soulful Ensemble

    I enjoyed your poem. It was insightful. Some poems have no point to them. I personally prefer those, like this one, that do.

  • 9 years ago

    by Vanessa Bell

    THAT WAS A WONDERFUL POEM...KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!

  • 9 years ago

    by Illusion

    Great work.
    the depth it has touched is indeterminable.

  • 9 years ago

    by Just That Girl

    I reallyy loved that poem! Its AMAZING! Your right.. all people ever care about is the outer beauty.. no one really cares to look a little harder and try to find the real beauty in people..
    5/5
    take care x

  • 9 years ago

    by robin milford

    I enjoyed this it made me laugh at the ending

  • 8 years ago

    by Not Enough

    HAHahaha! Awesome! The last line is great... Sadly I don't have much critisism for this one. It's great! She sounds like a very nice person! lol...
    "Hands on hips darling, and show your sexy pout" I love that! I can really picture it! A beautiful girl on the outside but ugly on the inside! I know the type. Great job. 5/5