It is so true.

Yeah it is, i use to think that it was important to treat people the way u want to be treated and always be there 4 friends no matter what but when u really do need someone there never actually there, in the end u just begin to wonder y u eva stayed around for so long. was it because u cared or because u wanted 2 wait and c if they cared?

All this is so true....keep up the great work

please keep writing and i will keep reading 5/5

This is a great poem there is so much truth in it to which is the sad thign
5/5 great work!
--emz--

An interesting and slightly unusual view of life and it's duality. Sometimes I think if we didn't laugh we would cry : )
Good poem.

I liked this poem, mostly because what you wrote is true 5/5

Wow this is sooo good! 5/5

REALLY GOOD POEM AND ITS ALL TRUE
-CATHERINE- 5/5

Its funny I never really thought about that....lol...BEAUTIFUL POEM :-)

Great observations!

its a great poem!!!
keep up...!

Awesome ending !

Love the poem, well done :D