Comments : Everlasting Love (collab with Ingrid)

  • 9 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    David,

    It was so much fun making this poem together with you. You are my dearest friend as well and my forever sweetheart!

    Love,

    XXXIngrid

  • 9 years ago

    by CrazyCowLady

    Hey...
    I love it... it has a deeper meaning then its letting on... i love the part:

    In a world where distance and age
    have no real meaning we met
    and
    A magical presence and mystery,
    A secret only you and I know
    The password

    Very well done to both of u i love it

    Hannah x x

  • 9 years ago

    by xxTaegan Emilyxx

    Soar into the sky with me,
    Higher than any bird has flown
    Our souls forever entwined,
    United in a love this world has never known

    ^^ my favorite lines! i loved it, it was a gorgeous poem and the flow was great! the words chosen where appropriate and strong as well as emotional.

    xx
    Taegan Emily

  • 9 years ago

    by Meme

    Co0o0o0o0o0o0ol
    I love it
    keep up the good work
    5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    A very beautiful write. a very heartfelt read.
    :] This piece is very powerful and the emotion
    was very well portrayed. I really like this one
    and the imagery and description was great. .
    an amazing write. :] 5/5.

  • 9 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Beautifully penned collaboration. The flow was consistant and the message was full of emotion. great job!