This was a beautiful poem dear. i love how you put it together. the rythem in the poem flowed through with out having many disruptions (but those are mostly cause of my father lol) but still its a great poem dear. <3 good work

I haven't commented on your poems in a while but you reach alot of good points in this poem and i like it. it is though a bit confusing in the beginning is the first stanza a different poem?
anyway its excellent i like the way you expressed everything i love the way you described your love and eternal passion keep writing this is good