Comments : I Never Had Anyone To Push Me.

  • 9 years ago

    by dora

    This was soo moving. every line was so touchng and powerful. lot of emotions in this poem.. a sad write, i liked this line:
    "I am still lying where you left me, I know your never coming back...
    But hun, just remember I never had anyone to push me [but you]"

    5/5 from me, keep it up. stay strong xx

  • 9 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    "Broken glass and a million old love notes that no longer hold meaning"...... beautiful, astoundingly beautiful. No words for your words to describe how wordless I am.

    "As much as I desperately want to throw it all away- I just can't..." Incredible. Cliche emotion, perfectly uncliche presentation of it.
    Perfect.

    I can't believe this poem hasn't rocked to fame-dom on this website. It is everything I feel, and usually everything I feel is how everyone else feels at the same time too ( I don't quite know how that works... it just seems to be we all feel the same in some way).
    Your poem is perfect. There are a few area's of tweaking that are needed, but other than that your poem is a masterpiece. It is filled with the words that I couldn't think of, the lines I wished I wrote.

    You have an incredible poem on your hands,
    and it was an honor to read it.

    Thank you,

    10/5
    ~Stephen White

  • Well I thought the title was interesting but that was about it honestly.I liked the point of it but it just didn't keep my attention.From the comments above I guess it's just me but yeah...Sorry.

  • 9 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    I think this poem is too amazing for words. I don't think they're enough words in the world to describe how great i think this poem is! The description was outstanding and the mental image you were able to let the reader get was. .simply amazing. And the emotions let out of the poem was amazing as well. And again, I can't choose just one stanza as my favorite! lol. a superb write! 5/5.

  • 9 years ago

    by Christina

    Awwwz what a sad poem
    but very well written!
    and ik how it feels to wait thinken that love will come back!
    keep it up!!!

    <3 i love you silly

  • 9 years ago

    by blue angel

    Nice and sweet... hope she realize her/his loss
    keep strong and stay cool, this will pass and soon you'll smile again... love really sucks ironically makes us feel better : )

  • 9 years ago

    by TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

    Omg…
    I had to read it several times, I couldn’ t help it, and every time I did I liked it more... So sad, yet so beautiful...
    And well, what can I say? I can totally relate, definitely. Actually, I think there is (at least) one moment in everyone’ s lives when we just feel exactly like t.h.a.t.
    I can tell it’ s hard to find the words to explain that ' feeling ' then, and *wow*, you absolutely succeeded, wonderful work.
    Anyway, thanks for sharing it with us and keep writing!
    5/5
    Best wishes,

    TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

  • 9 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Love such a cruel thing it seems nice poem i kinda reminds me of my ex always trying to find someone to blame 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    Another amazing piece.
    although my only thought is for this line
    "The after taste of your love is how can you say it- bitter sweet"
    i think it would flow much better, and people would read it better as
    "The after taste of your love is, how can you say it?- bitter sweet"
    mainly since you asked a question, there should be a question mark.
    but i loved it
    5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Roxy

    The first stanza makes the reader continue reading but when I hit these stanza's :

    Feels like I am watching a movie of our memories, it's on repeat;
    There are places where it skips or that could just be my heart...
    My head is pounding and the sound of your voice is saying "It's over"
    These walls keep getting smaller and my helpless nos grow louder-
    Those daggers or as you call them words hit my heart pretty hard,
    So darling, tell me, just tell me, what exactly am I to do now?

    For once in my life I had someone push me, and oh it hurts like hell;
    You still say you never pushed me, I tripped on a rock and fell,
    Well if I tripped it must of been on your lies not a rock sweetie-
    We should stick to our own stories [that's not really what I want]
    If only you would pay attention to at least one of my favorite songs,
    They are saying every word I have always been scared to say...

    I just completly blanked out!! They're so deep but yet so I cant explain it -.- Let just say you used to most simple words to tell a complicated story..If that makes any sense! xxxx mwah xxx

  • 9 years ago

    by Blissful

    The first stanza just had me hooked. Its imagery was effective and had me wanting more ...

    "Those daggers or as you call them words hit my heart pretty hard,"
    ^ ummm can you say WOW. I have never read anything like that before. That line just made the poem perfect for me. Well done.

    Your emotions were so deep and real that the descriptions really hit home with me because it was easy for me to relate with.

    Each one of your poems takes me to a different place which is why I enjoy your work so much. Another amazing piece hun.

    *5/5*

  • 9 years ago

    by Viola

    "Feels like I am watching a movie of our memories, it's on repeat;
    There are places where it skips or that could just be my heart..."

    ^I am amzed again. You seem to have a way with words. These are lines that I am very sure many people feel, as do I at this moment. I feel like I am inside this poem, I feel every line. It's incredible.

    Such a beautiful poem. I LOVE it once again. keep it up! =]
    --Viola