Comments : Was God so tired?

  • 9 years ago

    by LoveKeepsMeStrong

    I like this.
    well done =)

  • 9 years ago

    by Jackie

    Excellent poem Fran, very funny. I agree with Frank that it begs to be extended.
    Still 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by StandStill

    Lol. this is cute.

  • 8 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Yes SHe was and the scary part is we dont really grow up HAHA that was a funny poem well done Fran

    Grant

  • 8 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Cute!!!

  • 8 years ago

    by FELTON PHILLIPS

    Nice poem. Very funny, has classic nursery rhyme quality to it.

  • 8 years ago

    by Christopher Wry

    Don't know she has not answered my email. Very well done.

  • 8 years ago

    by Finding myself

    Haha this put a smile on my face haha it was great 5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by sneha

    Wow!It is amazing.I enjoyed it to the core.The last line says it all.U hit a 5/5.

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Haha this is so funny. I like the stlye, 5/5. Em

  • 8 years ago

    by Corinne

    Very cute Fran :-)

  • 6 years ago

    by Pink Butterfly

    Aw!!! Really cute.... I was totally delighted by this poem. lol... It made me smile!!! God bless you!!!

    -Pink Butterfly-

  • 5 years ago

    by ArtistrySoul

    Nice poem :), i think maybe sometimes old age when teenagers start to annoy you, but you can't be sure if God is a she or he oO

    great poem