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  • 9 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I really thought this was about a poor girl been kidnapped and is about to be done for! Then reading the railway track and the razor blade brought an image of a suicidal teenager!

    All in all to read this from the point of view of an inanimate object, was chilling. It had that cold fear, emotions of surrender and the imagery were alive too.

    Nicely penned.