You in particular, I find myself in many of your poems, how very sad yet not dramatic at all. I really love the fact that you expressed the pain you went through without over dramatizing the situation, but rather creating a scene.

The content is well structured, my only problem was all the little "i" especially at the start of the poem, but perhaps you've intended this.

I love poems that end with a tone of challenge or strength. Although you've went through this domination of what that person wants you to be, or trying to shape you, you still are trying to stand up for yourself.

I love your title, it does connect strongly to the poem, if its this how you want me to be, you have to know that I am aware of it and always have been, and I wont let you consume me, ergh I love that character :]

Amazing poem, really!

I love the meaning behind this piece. I do suggest that the capitals get put in where they are needed. Unless it is meant to be that way. =]

It also had a good flow and smooth reading style. Great Job!

*~BrittBratt~*

I love the meaning behind this piece. I do suggest that the capitals get put in where they are needed. Unless it is meant to be that way. =]

It also had a good flow and smooth reading style. Great Job!

*~BrittBratt~*