Comments : Love, When It Lingers

  • 9 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Another sad loss.. sorry :( Sometimes there is no words to describe how sorry we are.. :(

    Lovely piece.. Well written!
    Not too short or too long. perfect.

  • 9 years ago

    by Liz

    I was totally sad reading this, and then I read your comment above. Lol

    Anyway, while heartbreaking, this is absolutely beautiful.

    • 9 years ago

      by IdTakeABulletForYou

      I'm glad I could throw a little smile in there amongst the sadness. It's definitely been an emotional roller coaster lately, and so my pieces are a bit on the darker side.

      Thanks for reading, much love from me to you!

  • 9 years ago

    by Brenda

    Stephen, you did losing someone you loved dearly justice. I felt your loss, mourn the love that's no longer there. It's a good feeling though sensing their presence, they never really go away then do they? Well done, take care-Brenda

    • 9 years ago

      by IdTakeABulletForYou

      It's a tumultuous feeling, one that you never quite decide which fork to take so you end up staring in both directions indecisively until you find you're at the destination yourself.

      I dread every death, and my heart aches for every one I see in the news. It's a lot of aching.

      Thanks again for reading, much love,
      IdTakeABulletForYou