Ben Pickard ( F P C D )
This really is a very well written piece of poetry that - although sad throughout - was a real pleasure to read.
All the best,
NightFlyer ( F P C D )
Thanks Ben. Glad you like this. This poem is about someone special I knew and the wonderful evening we spent in Sanibel Island in Florida.
Mr Darcy ( F P C D )
I liked this very much. Releasing our sadness this way really helps.
Thanks for sharing.
Em ( F P C D )
I really thought I had commented on this but obviously not. It was superbly done with fabulous rhyming and a beautifully written yet sad story.
Well done on the win.
Meena Krish ( F P C D )
This is a very sentimental write for it holds much more for you then what the readers read. I like the flow and the way your feelings unfold with memories and then just like that without even saying sadness is floating there waiting to be known...nicely penned my friend.
Congrats on the Win
alka mendiratta ( F P C D )
Well deserved!!!! Congratulations!!!! Truly heartfelt.
ketaki ( C )
Very well composed... Keep writing