Comments : I died too

  • 19 years ago

    by FireCracker

    OMG, I loved this pom its GR8 ! ! Good Job .. !

  • 19 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    that is so beautifull written..and so tragic...im so sorry for your friend v.v..you are an amazing writter <33
    -Mortalidaga

  • 19 years ago

    by Honey Kisses 18

    damn that was sad i about cried but i held my tears in check..... gr8 poem!!!!!!!!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by nikki

    that was a great poem, brilliant work, i burst into tears when i read the name peter, i just recently lost someone named peter, anyway the poem was beautiful, filled with such emotion, great poetry

  • 19 years ago

    by NICKOLAS ELGERT

    That poem was very good. Sorry it happened to your friend.

  • 19 years ago

    by ~*Snow queen~*

    great poem, like always! lol. keep it up! u made my cry, i am soo sry fer wut ur friend went through.

  • 19 years ago

    by Unloved ♥

    I think this poem really touched me and I think you did a really good job on this poem. Very nice.

  • 19 years ago

    by stephyG

    that was a beautiful poem, i hope ur friend is ok

    love always stephyG xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Laura

    OMG, that is so sad, and i hope ur friend is doin ok. Ur poetry is awesome tho!

  • 19 years ago

    by Unseen Exposure

    Incredibly Touching and Sad... I'm sorry for your friends loss.

  • 19 years ago

    by Melissa

    This poem was so sad. I'm sorry for you're friends loss. She shouldnt blame her self though. Your poem is very touching.

  • 19 years ago

    by Diggs ♥

    This is such a sad poem. Well written .. but very depressing .. I really feel sorry for your friend..

  • 19 years ago

    by dandy

    This is such a touching and sad poem. I have no idea what I would do if this happened to me. your friend is very strong. tell her so

  • 19 years ago

    by Krillin

    Dis is sad. makes me realise that nothing in this life is certain especially life

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSilent Tearsxx

    This poem made me cry, it iz so gud though. but it makes em sad and think about my bf dying. k i g2g but this iz so gud

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Thats an excellent poem, keep writing. take kare x x x

  • 16 years ago

    by I love you always and today

    Omg I love that poem

    "I watched you disappear that day,
    your life was taken away from you,
    and as I watched you die in my arms,
    on the inside I died too."

    thats like the best ending i ever read great poem ~5~

  • 16 years ago

    by Chrissie

    This poem is wonderful. Extremely upsetting. I got tears in my eyes when i was reading it
    :[

    Beautifully written hun.

    Chrissie xx

  • 10 years ago

    by StormyStar

    I'm sorry for your loss.
    Such a simple poem but so heartfelt

    Good job 5/5