I loved it and it was not too long
malina ( F P C )
It wasnt too long....i loved it...big fan of yours...waiting for more^_^
XxFallenxFromxGracexX ( F P C D )
Aww this poem had me in tears!! its so sad but true!! i loved it 5/5
Wow! i really like your poem! it's really good!!!! I know how that girl feels like... hehe well except the fact that that guy in my life is still alive but he doesnt love me back... so yeah, i guess we're even. =)
Im boring you... sorry
i just wanted to tell you how great your poem is!!! =)
Mandy ( F P C )
Hey!!! i luv tht poem!! its sooo suh weet!!! i cried...well not really!! well ily!! can't wait to see you!! keep writing till your hand falls off...okay tht was stupid!! but keep it up!
»тωіѕтє∂.яєαlity« ( F P C D )
Hmm...You just seem to get me on almost every one of your poems. Actually, I am finding it amazing lol. I don't usually like many poems from the same author. Only because sometime they have a good day, and sometimes a bad. It changes with everyone. But you seem to hold my attention throughout all of your poems.
There was very deep and sad emotion in this poem, and I loved it. It gave a me a feeling that you know what you're talking about. Very well done. =) 5/5 xoxo
ashley ( F P C D )
Work on the capitilization, but other than that, it is a very nice story.
isabel ( F P C D )
keep on writing...
Brittany Ottmo ( F P C D )
Man i really love this poem...it is deep and secret....keep writting more and i will comment more later....5/5
Sara ( F P C D )
Day by day
their talks grew longer
minute by minute
their love grew stronger
if you love someone
don't make them wait
tell them you love them
before its too late
^^my favorite parts.. kinda sounds like someone who i know coughhh **jason** cough haha... but yeah 5/5 and ill ttul... great job again!!
That is a great poem. It sounds a lot like my friend and me. You are a very talented writer, keep up the good work! =]
Sydney ( F C D )
*Sigh** oh my gosh that was amazing. I loved it. My heart flipped when he died. gave me such a wave of emotion, which is a good thing. absolutly amazing! i gave it a 5
*~-Viola-~* ( F P C D )
Aww this poem really brings out a great message..and it's very touching and truthful..i absolutely love it !! Good Job =]
Abused101 ( F C D )
OMG!! This is very good.. Its so sad if that happened im so sorry but this is amazing! I love it! 5/5.... Keep it up you got mad talent..
This is really well written and i can feel the emotion you put into it, its really good! :)
quillinhand ( F P C )
Oh My God..I loved it...it nearly made me cry. Well not literally but i felt my throat choke up lol
buffalo sabres x one team x one ( F )
I really love this poem i was on the verge of tears at the end this was very well writtin.
I am speachless...this is a beautiful poem...don't EVER quit writing YOU ARE TERRFIC
Awww it's sooooo sad...I just thought the girl would have a happy ending. I hope it teaches us a lesson.
Tricky Daze ( F P C D )
It was so cool..but i will help you with some points to make it perfect
First hun.please don't forget to capitalize the begining letters
And second hun..the puncuation hun..especially shes-She's
Other than that
It was awesome
Keep it up