Ww that made me read twice and think about my life, good poem xxx

Very sad! I hope everything works for you. I have been through that and I still hurt and it has been over a year. I am slowly recovering and returning back to normal. Just focus on you and what you like to do, and soon you will feel whole again! Good luck to you!

sweet_rebellion

Very sad! I hope everything works out for you. I have been through that and I still hurt and it has been over a year. I am slowly recovering and returning back to normal. Just focus on you and what you like to do, and soon you will feel whole again! Good luck to you!

sweet_rebellion

Wow this poem is amazing a little rough on the flow but the words just come out and capture i know exactly how you feel trust me
many ppl can relate to this

"i cry so much my eyes bleed
my face is numb and i cant see
my pain is to much i cant go on
ever since she left me Ive felt so lost
the night sky shines down on me
my tears fall down and i drop to my knees"

5/5 great job

laura

The sky has fallen on me
my life can no longer be
my heart still beats for this girl
i swear she has changed my whole world
i cant seem to forget her
i try so hard but it just hurts

beautiful lines written with nice choice of words. This piece is very heartfelt and i can feel the grief in this piece. Just correct some to/too mistakes. 5/5 nonetheless

I've died like this a million times and I'm still here!

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid