Ewww... enticing and thought provoking. I have never looked at it that way and yet it all makes perfect sense.

I really love this and all the thought s that you put into it. I could actually see myself in that corner with you; trying to comfort you as I cried my heart out also.

I just cannot get over how amazing this piece is and how it shot right through me. It is almost as though I am left on the floor right now.

Just simply brilliant and wonderful. Thank you for writing this.

--Sher

Great job. I loved it. The flow was great and you used punctuations and everything. I miss that sometimes when i read poems without. It shows you spent time on it. I definitely felt the emotion and I liked the concept of love being the evil entity while pain and sorrow were like the protagonists in your life. Good Job and keep it up.

Interesting poem. it was well written at the beginning, with nice flow, but i found myself losing interest about 2/3 of the way through. the rhythem seemed a little off... other than that, it was really well done! food for thought!

I enjoyed this...it worked for me, you get a great big HELL YEAH... the only negative thing is the disclaimer thing at the end it kinda scared me...