It is so hard to watch a situation like this,not much loyalty in the world I`m afraid,good job on the poem,very heartfelt.

Wow.Congradulations to the both of you.I really loved this poem.It flowed very well and was deep in heartfelt emotions.A 5/5 for sure.Can't wait for the next one.
-miranda

Now that was deep...and held alot of emotions. you guys did a great job on this piece. The flow was just amazing and everything just fitted perfect..Great Job...

You guys deserve a 5...

So sad and so emotional..it reminds of my friend who did it too to me..well of course it turned me down..i felt that im so useless..just sharing..ok..i dont what to say it was so great..two thumbs..5/5 for it..keep it up..^^

You two has done a great job, i really loved the topic and how it flew after it.

keep it up

Trust me i know what it is like to have a "friend" that you are worried would take the guy you like away from you. anyway, this is an amazing poem. it is once again an amazingly written poem. you deffineterly put a lot of emotion into your poems. 5/5

Kalee

A couple grammar mistakes and the flow was rough in spots, but I like the subject matter and the feelings behind it. Nice piece of work.

I've been in that kinda situation, and it hits close to home. It was moving, almost brought me to tears of memory. But thats another thing in itself, but it takes a great writer to do that. Great Job 5/5

Beautiful, I can take this to heart in a way. love this one. 5/5

This was lovely, so sad, yet powerful and
really well written. A great collab, my friend
Love Tara-Kay
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WOW, Elaine! This is such a beautiful poem! You and Marlanna always do a great job together! The words were just simply amazing and nothing less. I also loved how you rhymed up everything and made it all go together perfectly! The poem was flawless and you did a great job!! 5/5 <3 <3 <3 <3

~Kayla~

I frikken love that last stanza, so beautiful and moving, as was the whole piece.
Despite being so sad, it was beautifully written, great job to both of you!

Excellent Poem! Both of you did very well!!

5.5**
<33

A sad piece written beautifully. The rhyme and flow were flawless throughout the entire poem. 5/5
marcella

You two did a really good job together
I had read the first one too and liked it too
My fave lines are;

Your only but a dream now,
Almost from my reach,
I need to feel your warmth,
Or I'm going to screech.

Keep it up hun,
Laura

That was phenomenal the emotion was sooo strong! again keep up the great work

I can definately relate to this, as many people would be able to. It was such a simple poem, yet filled with a lot of emotion. A very enjoyable read. I've never done a collab before, but I bet it's fun. Well done. :]
5/5

Tammie

Now this is something I could really relate too. The emotions you spoke of are ones I am familar with. The flow was kinda rocky and things seemed forced but the feelings were real. *4/5*