Damn Good Poem 5-5

Nice poem! I like it! Really good! Come check out mine sometime... Good job!

I really liked this poem.. its like it had a slow steady pace to the begining but then you get to the point of the few more minutes and its seems to speed up like your there in the background just watching. Then it slows back down into a reslolution just to leave u hanging w/ your last line. Good job.. really creative.