Courageous Dreamer ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-22
I believe as we grow older we grow with wisdom as well. This was wonderfully written, Walah. Awesome dedication.
Rainbow Dreaming ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-22
Our elders have so much wisdom, and so many stories of interest. I loved this poem and how sweet you were to write it :]
Sylvia A ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-22
Wonderful tribute to your grandma. I loved my "granny" as much as you do yours. Grandma's are the best people. Well done.
Meena Krish ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-23
Reading this brought back memories of my
grandmother..a lovely dedication that describes grandmothers :)
Ingrid ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-03
This is a very thoughtful dedication to a person who is very important to you, no doubt.
Maybe you would care to read a little about the Haiku format?
This poem is not a Haiku, I am surprised no one mentioned it to you, maybe they didn't want to because it is such a sweet dedication and they didn't want to seem harsh or anything.
http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/haiku/haiku.html
I will give you a 5 for the poem, because it deserves it, nontheless:)
God bless,
Ingrid
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