Happy Birthday Angel

by Coldstone

Many many happy returns of the day Sweetheart,
Hard to believe that it was just 20 years back when,
The earth smiled with sheer joy,
God had sent an angel on it in the form of a boy.

The proud mother looked at her newborn child,
Small oval face and gentle eyes,
Soft innocent features,a cute smile,nothing imperfect,
Any other form couldn't have been more perfect.

Years later, what happened was meant to be,
I met the angel and knew he was for me,
Was it those gentle eyes or the smile did it?
I was head over heels in love with whatever was it.

Now standing besides my angel, my hand in his,
I reflect upon the moment he walked into my life,
Adding so many colors, their beauty I can't define,
Caressing my hand softly, he looks so fine.

Not a day goes by when I don't thank Him,
Afterall,blessed I had been with His masterpiece,
Perfectly compatible with me you are, dear angel,
Nothing to doubt, made for each other we are, my angel!

Happy Birthday!

 

Submission date : 2010-07-19

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Coldstone ( C D ) at 2010-07-21

Thanks!:) This is very special for me:)

WakingFreedom ( F P C D ) at 2010-07-27

A poem that left a smile on my face, good job. A write that expresses a feeling of love. This is a good write.

Karl Wild ( F P C D ) at 2010-07-27

It wasn't great, but it wasn't awful either. Some of the repetition was good, but you also overused the word angel. Couple little punctuation errors, nothing really to serious. I gave this an honest 4/5 nice work very sweet

Coldstone ( C D ) at 2010-07-28

Thnx!

Pink Butterfly ( F C ) at 2010-08-14

The person behind the poem is really special...This is so sweet and adorable as well...God bless you!

-Pink Butterfly-



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