I need a poem about . . .

  • LiveForHim
    16 years ago

    My boyfriend. I love him to death but he has thought about commiting suicide. I need a poem that says something about me loving him and never wanting him to die or leave me. You know? And i Don't want to write it myself, sorry.Please HELP ME!!
    i need it!

  • nikki
    16 years ago

    I have a few i think, if you wanna take a look at them

  • Noelle Wright
    16 years ago

    I think the best poem that would really help your bf would be something from the heart =] so why dont you try and see what you can think up

    Noelle

  • BreakMyWingsAndRun
    16 years ago

    I agree with above. only you kow what you truly feel. just try and see what happens. good luck!
    -Amber

  • Choose xX Alex Xx Life
    16 years ago

    Write down how you feel about it words and phrases decribing what its doing and what the consequences will be. Then put the words into stanzas, includin all emotions and pain youll see the magic lol xxx alex xxx

  • all or none
    16 years ago

    Not sure if this will help but it is the best i have
    In Gracious Words
    They are sitting in the blue eyes
    The viewing of the skies
    In the ocean of the sea

    The beauty on the eyes
    The depths of a soul
    In gracious words,
    we lie in beauties grace
    Waiting for the wanting glance
    To spill the crimson world descend unto me

    This world a new
    The crimson light in this shall wait in wanting view
    In gracious words,
    we lie in beauties glance

    The velvet smooth touch upon my skin, it's the feel of a fallen angels touch
    Warming the cold upon my face
    in the fall from grace
    Thrown away from the side of god
    Now time will stand still on beauties path

  • RobinAnn13
    16 years ago

    I'm willing to give it a shot. Just pm me. Tell me exactly how you feel and everything you want to tell him and I'll just rearrange it to make a poem. If you want me to try just let me know.

  • Jessica Evelyn Maxwell
    16 years ago

    I have some love poems

    you can check em out if ya want to

    hope everything works well

  • Gizmo
    16 years ago

    Check out some of mine.
    hope everythings k

  • Lemma
    16 years ago

    Hey I hope you found one. I've been thinking about writing one like this recently cuz I'm a similar situation. Let me know if you're still looking and I'll message you when I've written it.

    Em xXx

  • Angela
    16 years ago

    You can check mine out..
    but i really think you should come up with one
    xoxo

  • hadia
    16 years ago

    I dont know a poem, but I just want to tell you that, the person who makes you cry..isnt worth crying over! Someone special person in your life, will find you someday<3 Feel better!

  • ilu
    16 years ago

    Hey,....Maybe you can read my poem...Its entitled My other half...just ignore the very last line coz i really wrote it for the Twilight Novel...Hope u like it!!

  • Blackstar
    16 years ago

    Just write a poem of your feelings about him.
    I think that's the best.

  • TwistedAngel xx
    16 years ago

    Yeah itll mean more to u both if u no u wrote it
    hope it goes well

    xx