What L O V E Does.

by erin girl   Feb 7, 2008


When i picture us together
i feel like nothing else matters
The whole world stops when i feel
your hands around my waist.
Just the touch of your hand on my
face makes my life all that much better.
Everything that makes no sense, starts to.
Hope comes into play,and i feel like i am free at last.

Thank you for setting me free...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Poetic Ninja aka Papachopchop

    I remember when I felt that way. I can't wait to feel that way again but I'm sure it will be some time before that happens :( You did a wonderful job on the poem. Keep writing!

  • 16 years ago

    by Letty

    *Imagery. Sorry about the misspelling in the first comment. : )

  • 16 years ago

    by Letty

    This is really beautiful. I loved the imergery you used in it. The flow was smooth and everything just turned out great. I only suggest that you use punctuation in some parts of the poem where it's needed; and capitalize the single I. Everything eles looks great. Keep up the great work.

    Letty

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    I wish i could put into words how my bf makes me feel when he hugs me! you did an amazing job. i know just how it feels. bravo

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