It made me cry.
Hard.

Wonderful job, darling.
I loved it

Awe....This brought tears to my eyes. It's just simply wonderful and beautiful, but sad. You have out done yourself with this one. I loved everything about it. I am definitely putting this in my favorite poem section. You're just awesome!

Letty

P.S. You left me speechless with this one.

This is a gr8t pome, i like the way it sounds when i read it very musical

That was like super saaad! =/
but, i love the way you write, you use such nice words.

Awwwwww. its sad... i love it.... nice feelings

Pretty good =)

Wow i like.....= )

BEAUTIFUL! 5/5
Melody :)

Very sad poem, deep and emotional!
Loved it!

Keep up the writtin!

Danielle
xx

5-5

No one could prevent it, the world was sentanced to death the moment homo sapien sapiens set foot on earth's dirt. Excellent write though, very powerfull.

--HollywoodSmile ((you Gothic Queen, remember me?))