I loved that, it was sooo deep. 5/5 :)

This piece was amazing.

He did the sweetest things
But then he would screw up again
He knows almost everything about me
But does he know i still love him.........?

^^^ my favorite stanza is this one. I can relate. It's funny how a guy can know so much about u except for how much you love him. way to let your emotions flow into your work. once again 5/5
kat

"Remembering the painful lies
Everything he said
Everything we did
Are all in my mind"

agh i know exactly how that feels ^^ seriously it sucks
5/5 <33

This is very deep and really well written.

keep up the great work

5/5