Very well expressed...Now i understand what made u post that topic...Ur poems are exceptional too..Only true poets can touch the idea of what ur tryin to portray..Words choice were superb..I liked the emotions being emphasized in the poem..You are the master of your own fate..the heights you can reach only you can decide..

Although you have ur own style of writtin which is good, i would prefer if you'll put it into stanzas equally and with proper punctuations..Of course uneven structure adds effect on constructin a poem but as for this particular poem would have been even better ((as it was already beautifully done)) if the long sentences were made into 2 lines...

But all in all, this piece is stunning..Good Job...aNd Keep writtin..