Again another beautiful expression of imagery and words. I loved the message behind it and everyting just flowed effortlessly. The words you used fit the poem perfectlly and it was quite effective. Well done *5/5*

Aww, so cute! it remindes me of a father i know :)
5/5
xoxo
~waiting~

Such an amazingly, expressive piece of poetry
makes us make the most out of life
5/5 excellent job
Sarah -xo