The imagery here really captured my attention and had me hooked from beginning to end.

"As I watch his lips move silently,
Speaking words I try hard to grasp."
^I loved how this flowed and painted a picture I could relate with ... beautiful.

The last two lines were the perfect way to end your poem. Overall it was a beautiful write. Well done *5/5*

I love it. It's just so.. Nice, sweet, and stuff.

Excellent ~

His tired blue eyes
Burn through mine,
Melting all the strength
I barely have left.

5/5. I liked this lines. Keep on writting!