This is pretty good.. i liked it... there are a few spelling mistakes..but other than that it was good. 5/5

It was a sweet poem. I'm not a fan of love poems, so I didn't really enjoy reading this. Don't take that wrong though, because I don't like most love poems. I thought you might have forced the rhyme a little. If it's going to mess with the poem just leave the rhymes out. Other than that it was good.

Keep writing!
Cayce

My favourite lines:

"And I have the mist of her essence
The wave of her soul
The key to her heart
That I shall forever hold"

Beautifully written and so sincere, love the ending aswell. A few spelling mistakes here and there but overall and really sweet poem.

Em xXx

Thanks for the advice, I will definitely work on those areas...

I loved it = ]

Amazing poem...loved reading it....