Wow, amazing, great selection of words.

all the best and take care

Sammy,

What a beautiful poem you have penned here. You never cease to amaze me!
Your choice of words is remarkable...

Hugs, sweetie

XXIngrid 5/5

Sam
you have done an amazing job on this form. The word choices and imagery are wonderful. I can see this beautiful flower with my minds eye.
Great job!
Love Cindy

Beautiful Lento...one of my favorite forms....interesting subject, the lotus, very symbolic.....love it!

Yes! This was absolutely breathtaking. Like Cindy said in my minds eye I can see the whole picture of this beautiful delicate flower taking on the world in striving to reach its peak. Beautiful imagery.

Hmm that style i have never seen but the words were something powerful, i enjoyed it thanx 5/5

This poem is as pure and perfect as what it depicts. There is no higher praise than that, surely.

Good job...nice poem