Comments : Behind The Mask

  • 16 years ago

    by Chase

    "But no one notices
    No one can see.
    That through all the smiles and laughs
    I'm hiding the real me."

    I can totally relate to this poem. VERY WELL WRITTEN!! ^___^

  • 16 years ago

    by Grunge Angel

    Yes, I agree with the gentlemen below, very well written. I have a dear friend who goes through alot and resorted to similar tactics. I'm not here to judge, but it doesn;t seem like an empty poem...cutting will give you nothing more then release of emotion. I'd hate to see anyone suffer the way I saw my friend.

  • 16 years ago

    by true secret emo

    Another amazing poem

  • 15 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    I guess you know the mask must go
    your poetry is a shot to the heart each
    word so sad but carefully chosen
    another masterpiece here