Incredible, It's rare someone knows how to place a simile or two into a poem without making it studder, but you did it well, nice imagery as well. I'm off to read more from you ^^ 5/5 faved

Amazing poem........
beautifully written, definately 5 out of 5 for this poem
well done =)

What a nice work!!!...I like sonnets a lott..and I think U did a great job...Yeah it was a lovely sonnet so keep it up:)..