Comments : Pond Slime

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Lol Nice flow
    XD
    Great job

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    That was short and sweet. The flow was really good, and I liked the wording. There's not too much more to say. I loved it!

    Cayce xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    I never read a poem like this before. It was one lovely poem and gave so much meaning to it. Friendship....i give you 5/5.

    -Sarah A.

  • 16 years ago

    by Invisible Shadow

    Good flow to it. i love the rhyming seam too

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    This is great! and veryyy fun to read.. awesome job.. you have talent . keep it up =)