Oh, i really like this poem, great job!

I loved this!
I can't even choose a favourite stanza cuz it's all so wonderful. I actually loved everything about it. You're a rly good writer!!
Definitely 5/5 :):)

Another good piece. I liked so many lines, like;
'Because the fake me is easier to defend'
'It's not me who has to take the fall of reality, When it's label of pretend finally expires.'
'Most likely they won't, though there's a chance they can'

I loved the bit about cloud nine, because you really put a twist on it. I love it when people put a new twist on things that everyone sees the same, like when I read a poem recently that said that mermaids were evil creatures. Anyway, great piece.

Brad

P.S. I totally agree with you about the 'rrc' thing, people most certainly do need to work on their feedback skills, as well as being truthful.

It's better to be emotionless and know its not who you really are than to be emotionless and know that is who you are.So by that, you already have your ray of sunshine showing you a little hope. An upside to verything:)