I <3 it.
i totally get the idea.
being in a relationship more out convenience than out of love?
am i right?

Your poem is so true, we have almost everything but does it mean anything?

5/5

This was really good, it really sounds like you write directly from the heart... not dressing up anything too much, and that's admirable! 5/5 Keep writing and your freed desires will help fulfill your dreams!

Cheers,
Richard

Really good poem. :)

LOVE IT!! ITS SO TRUE! GREAT WORK
ANOTHER AMAZIN ONE OF YOUR POEMS!
KEEP WRITING! 5/5
THANX 4 COMMENTIN MINE 2:)
xx

Wow that was very good i liked the first stanza and the way u started it, its very unique
and different. the poem was well worded and structured
great job

5/5

True True.. Poem is really good!!

5/5