Jeff, This is a amazing poem I love the flow and the emontionthat you show here it shows pure love and devotion great work 5/5 and thanks for your comment. Tammi,

Amazing poem. I Loved the last stanza

"Changed my life,
gave it new meaning".
"So please just one wish,
For this lonely human being".

Great poem 5/5.

Take care,

Sarah A.

I love this one keep writing

The style of "praying" made the poem so charming. i'm not a religious person but i know this feeling of missing someone so much)
you put every "pray" in two lines - and it makes the poem well-structured
hard to find favourite lines coz every stanza is filled with a great emotion&love
5/5

Hi Jeff,

You asked me to look at your poem, so I guess you want my feedback?
Wel the last line of the second stanza I would have written like this: As I kneel and pray...and I would have left out all the quotation marks.
I love the poem, it is very sweet and endearing.

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

That is definitely a poem that make the reader go "Awwwwww!". I thought it was very sweet. I liked how you made the poem into a prayer, instead of just talking to the person you love. I thought that made it a little unique. Very good poem!

Cayce xx

Nice poem. Truly shows how much you care for that person. Great read keep it up

cheers, josh

Wow...this poem is amazing... i absolutely loved it... from beginning to end you had my complete attention in this one.... the emotions were strong and so powerful... i liked your technique in this poem...

in the last stanza you might wanna change "she" to shes"

but other than that it was flawless... good job. 5/5 from me. =]

and thanx for all the comments you left me.